New Story

[Kicks]

I'm as STUMPED as a TREE trunk. This story BRANCHES out too much and LEAVES me wondering what the ROOT of the message is.

[kchenault]

There is no story, only a fragment of a thought. Flesh it out man!

[Kara]

Um, i kinda think that the story is that the girl is starting a relationship, and the sensei does not want it to interfear with her training......

 

or, the girl is manipulating tom (who is her next opponent in the tournament) to get information on his sparring skills and sensi does not aprove of this.....

 

or, the sensei is being unreasonable controling her life and she's only being human....

 

The part with the last opponent is exactly what it says, she lost against him.....

 

and she got involed with him last time too and it ruinned everything and the sensei lost his student....

 

or that the last guy got involed with a girl and left his training, and the sensei does not want ashley to leave too.

 

eighter way we need to know the grounds to their lifesyles and traditions to make a judgment...every background is different and should not be judged from different cultures then their own. some have leeway and some are strict, therefor it may be approiate and it may not be.

 

I can't pick what to say cause the chioces are all that the tournament is the ALL IMPORTANT issue and the sensei is right.....so eighter way i can't say that the girl actually has a chioce and be happy about it.

[PrideampPoise]

The passage makes no sense whatsoever.

Check's in the mail, kchenault.