I recieved these in an email but had to share These are metaphors from actual GCSE essays : Her hair glistened in the rain like nose hair after a sneeze. The red brick wall was the colour of a brick-red crayon. Even in his last years, Granddad had a mind like a steel trap, only one that had been left out so long it had rusted shut. The young fighter had a hungry look, the kind you get from not eating for while. She had a deep, throaty, genuine laugh, like that sound a dog makes just before it throws up. It came down the stairs looking very much like something no one had ever seen before. The ballerina rose gracefully en pointe and extended one slender leg behind her, like a dog at a lamppost. She walked into my office like a centipede with 98 missing legs. Hope they brightened your day Anyone got anymore to add?