Is this roundhouse kick acceptable enough for grading?

[Prototype]

Struggling here guys. Let me know if it's good enough for a pattern with a roundhouse kick and breaking.

Slow motion - https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=XaBT5fRdhxU

Regular speed - https://www.youtube.com/watch?time_continue=3&v=dxW70wqzgmw

[OneKickWonder]

Probably. You might get some 'feedback' about it afterwards but I'd say most would let that through.

Looks like you've gone for the more traditional ball of the foot version rather than the faster instep version. Was that your intention? That's the version we use in TSD wherever it appears in forms and also for breaking.

Just make sure you get your toes back properly.

[Prototype]

Probably. You might get some 'feedback' about it afterwards but I'd say most would let that through.

Looks like you've gone for the more traditional ball of the foot version rather than the faster instep version. Was that your intention? That's the version we use in TSD wherever it appears in forms and also for breaking.

Just make sure you get your toes back properly.

Yeah, ball of the foot is mandatory for forms.

[sensei8]

What rank are you grading for??

[Prototype]

What rank are you grading for??

Black stripe

[Prototype]

Here's one with the instep. I think this one is my best?

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=EL9OALhs-5Q

[sensei8]

What rank are you grading for??

Black stripe

Black Stripe?? I don't know what that means.

[MatsuShinshii]

The video's have been removed.

[bushido_man96]

The video's have been removed.

Same here. None of your videos are staying up.

[DWx]

Prototype, whilst its great you want to improve and are coming to KF for guidance, have you asked your instructor? They might be able to provide more specific advice about what they want to see from you.