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Hello, everyone. It's been a long time since I posted but yet again, I could use some help.

For a project in script writing class, I decided to shorten and rewrite a movie I tried to make a while ago.

I'll also might be able to make this short film towards the end of my film school career. I'll have access to a lot more resources.

This time, I want to revamp all of the villains to make them more individual instead of looking (basically) the same but having different personalities. So I'm going to show you their introductory descriptions. From that, tell me which name fits the character best. I've narrowed it down to three names for each.

Demon of Wrath:

He is a tower of a demon. His fiery, glowing eyes hide behind a hood. A short-sleeved dogi highlights his extremely broad shoulders and biceps. His hakama makes him appear to be floating over the ground. He is always dragging around a Zangetsu sword. A segmented Roman Lorica protects his stomach and shoulder. His forearms bare long, spiked bracers. Two flaps of steel hang over his thighs from a steel belt around his waist. This demon is the leader of the group simply because he’s killed everyone else who disagrees with him on that subject.

Under the hood, he has dark scales on his cheekbones and chin. There are three rows of bony spikes on his head. His mouth has wolf's teeth on the inside.

Names:

Iratus

Irascor

Rabies

Demon of Pride:

A tall, skinny demon. His posture is straight and his arms are folded. A cocky smile on his handsome face bares jagged teeth as he looks down on everyone around him. He pulls out his sword to showoff a few fancy practice jabs. With a malicious grin and yellow eyes on his sword, he puts it back in its sheath.He wears a black, short-sleeved dogi and pants, all with red trim. He sports a shining brass chainmail under his dogi. A decorated belt and frog holds a basket-hilted claymore to his waist. His forearms glow with mirror-polished bracers with a large ruby in the middle. He is decorated head to toe. With piercings in his ears and nose, many gold chains around his neck, rings on his fingers and a large belt buckle on his waist. Even the golden basket on his sword has been coated with precious stones.

Names:

Fierezza

Fastosus

Exaltatio

Demon of Lust:

A small and attractive-looking female demon. She is standing in between Michael and the woman with her claws stabbed into their backs. She’ll lean to the woman and say something flirty. The woman will say it along with her. When she leans towards Michael, his retort comes from her as well. She wears tight, black leotard and dark-brown camouflage apple-bottom shorts. Lace leggings lead down into tall, leather boots that come just below the knee. Her eyes are purple. Around her neck is a thick, gold chain and her index fingers are steel claws. She is carrying a pair of sais on the back of her hips.

Names:

Avidita

Lussuria

Orexis

Tell me what you think. The rough draft of the script is due on Wednesday :D

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Go to SeventhSanctum.com if you haven't already. also, research Paradise Lost by John Milton. All sorts of demons in there, all public domain.

My fists bleed death. -Akuma

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my suggestion :

demon of wrath - Wrathia

demon of pride : pridoustus

demon of lust : lucious.

Then again, it's kinda dinosaur name.

Another suggestion :

demon of wrath : horrodous.

Demon of pride : eusysus

demon of lust : Barradon.

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