Ironberg Posted April 10, 2004 Posted April 10, 2004 Definately not MA related, but here it goes: I composed this song a while back, and sequenced it using fruityloops Producer edition. You can find it on this webpage: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/electronicmonkmusic.htm I'm no maestro, mind you. However, I've dabbled in music for some number of years off and on. It's a bit of 80-ish sounding techno, but I wanted some constructive critisizm on it (honesty appeciated). With my new job, and my senior year heating up, I haven't had the time to make any more tunes. If you don't like it, don't worry. I've already been told by some musicians that the sampled instruments didn't sound the greatest. "An enlightened man would offer a weary traveler a bed for the night, and invite him to share a civilized conversation over a bowl of... Cocoa Puffs."
monkeygirl Posted April 10, 2004 Posted April 10, 2004 The percussion in the beginning sounds a little strange, like the rhythm is off... With the current instruments, it's pretty 80-ish, but with different ones it would be really cool. I like the bit with the chimes...probably my favorite part. You have a nice sense of progression and development in the song. It kind of reminds me of an Ace of Base song, in a good way. Good job! 1st dan & Asst. Instructor TKD 2000-2003No matter the tune...if you can rock it, rock it hard.
Ironberg Posted April 11, 2004 Author Posted April 11, 2004 Thanks for the reply. Yeah... I'm a bit concerned about the fact that I can't seem to find any better instruments - electronic ones can still cost money - and downloaded free VST plugins are usually crap. "An enlightened man would offer a weary traveler a bed for the night, and invite him to share a civilized conversation over a bowl of... Cocoa Puffs."
Rich_2k3 Posted April 13, 2004 Posted April 13, 2004 pretty good, sounds like somthing u'd here on a computer game or somthing. Abit of guitar would be a nice touch. "When my enemy contracts I expand and when he expands I contract" - Bruce Lee
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